This story has to points of views. When you see this : ---------- it means its the other person's point of view, and it will pick up where i left off. So enjoy my short story: You Promised. FEaturing a girl named Grace and a boy named Jared.
P.O.V.: Grace-
"I saw him today, Kristy." =[
"Andd??" o.o"
"HE stareds at me, then walked away." =/
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P.O.V.: Jared-
"I saw her today, Warren." =/
"So what? She's just a girl." =.=
"She looked different." =[
"Who cares." =o
"I Do..." :|
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P.O.V.: Grace-
"WE were at the bar." =o
"Why didn't you invite me?" >:o
"My brother was there. And he went to pick me up." o.o
"Oh." o.o
"He was with another girl. She was really pretty." T^T
"Why do you still care?" O.o?
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P.O.V.: Jared-
"I saw her at the bar." =o
"O.m.g. big shock." (at this point Warren rolls his eyes at Jared."
"Why do i even talk to you?" =.=
"'Cause I'm your friend?" o.o
"Then my sister came. She turned away when my sister came." T . T
"You mean the sister, with looonnnggg blond hair, green eyes, and has like a gre-" =p
"Yeah. That one. What other sister do i have?!?!" >=o
"No clue. Are you testing me?" o.o?
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P.O.V.: Grace-
"He promised me, that, we'd be together...forever..." (at this point, Grace breaks down an cries)
"Boys are bit**es." = o =
"You always say that." o.o"
"But it's always true."
"He walked away, and my brother took me to his new sports car. He drove me home, then left." o.o
"I don't get why you keep calling him a 'he'. 'HE's more like a 'she'." - o -
(Grace stares at Kristy.)
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P.O.V.: Jared-
"I promised her, that, we'd be together forever." T^T
"Lieeesss." =o
"I kinda realize that now...." =.=
"You do?"o.o
"Yea." =.=
"Oh. Okay." o.o
"Her new boyfriend drove her home in a cool looking sports car." =|
"REALLY?!?! How did it look like?!?"O.O
"Nevermind."=.=
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P.O.V.: Grace-
"I looked back whe i got into the car." ><
"Who cares. If i were you, he'd/ she'd be dead by now." :o
"DON'T KiLL HiM!!!" (Grace freaks out)
"Why not?" o.o
"Because."
"Why?"
"JUST BECAUSE!" (Grace throws a pillow at Kristy.)
Saturday, August 30, 2008
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